Rat Chinese Zodiac HD—By TinySky

The voices are livelythe pictures beautiful and the story cute I would easily give another star if these bugs would be fixed Title page spelling of Manual Flip P 1 You need on instead of of the zodiac P 2 Add the word that to read a legend that said that Also p 2 rewrite the sentence to read to determine the order of ox P 3 Please wake is 2 words The text reads earlier but the voice says early The last sentence needs a period P 4 You should have a period after cat then capitalize Instead P 6 You should have had any comments and raised a different Put a period after cat and not a comma then capitalize She The voice misses the word in the text still The voice makes better sense saying arrangement of and to the heart not in the heart P 7 Put a period after glance then capitalize The Change Momently to Immediately P 8 Put a space between Why and Is The text says that of an ox but the voice says oxs P 9 Put a comma not a period after ox P10 Put a period after idea and capitalize So I hope this has been helpful for an update to fix these mistakes           Rat Charm rating and bugs

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